[Free-sklyarov-uk] Press Release: UK Free Dmitry Sklyarov Pro test

Julian T J Midgley jtjm at xenoclast.org
Tue, 31 Jul 2001 12:11:57 +0100 (BST)


On Tue, 31 Jul 2001, Dan Ackroyd wrote:

>
> >"despite the fact that the software he wrote was sold by the company he
> worked for"
>
> You could remove 'he wrote' as it is not clear exactly how much he wrote
> himself as he was part of a team of programmers, whereas 'he wrote' sounds
> like he wrote it all.
>
> Typo: and not by 'him himself'
>
> Apart from those (and the date :) sounds good to me

Have amended that sentence to read:

  He is charged with trafficking in a copyright circumvention mechanism,
  despite the fact that the software, which he helped to write, was sold
  by the company he worked for (through a US reseller) and not by him
  directly.

All the best,

Julian

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